The Gushen Grove Sonnets

By Mike Garofalo

 

Quintain Sonnets: 5252, 554, 555, 553

 

1.

Listening to Change

I listened to another say
what I resisted to hear
what was alien to me
what outlined my ire
what I wanted to fight

But then I settled down
loosened my blockhead mind

Thought things over patiently,
listened more carefully,
saw matters from other sides,
respected the integrity
and sincerity of other kinds

Of thinking outside my closed boxes
of my habits of opinions needing overhaul.

 

Michael Peter Garofalo, in 2021, defined
Four Quintain Sonnet Forms that he used
in his writing: 5252, 554, 555, and 553.
This was an original and unique contribution
to the arts of Quintain Poetry. He invented
these four forms and then wrote over 82
quintain sonnets, as show below. Volumes 5
and 6 of Bundled Up have the most quintain
sonnets.

 

 

2.

The Bottom Line

"Caress the detail, the divine detail."
    - Vladimir Nabokov
“We think in generalities, but we live in details.”
    - W. H. Auden
"The idea of one overbearing truth is exhausted."
    - Thomas Mann
“A profound attention to the details of this world.”
    - George Levine
“Cherish the minutes heureuses.”
    - Charles Baudelaire
“The vast and unsuspected reality of small things
    - Robert Nozick
“We are better satisfied in particulars.”
    - Wallace Stevens
"God is in the details." - Mies Van Der Rohe

“Details are all there are.” - Maezumi Roshi
“Focus on small worlds of order.” - Paul Valery
“No ideas but in things." - William Carlos Williams
"In general, be more spedific." - Mike Garofalo

    "To study the self is to forget the self.
    To forget the self is to be enlightened
    By the ten thousand things."
         - Zen Master Dogen

The Bottom Line

 

 

3.

Details on Details, Zoom In

The endless treasures of the everyday,
the uncommonness of common things;
Ordinary mind does point the way
to unspoken wonders of myriad beings.

Whether a leaf, the moon, a plastic spoon,
or a shoe, an eye, an infant's cry;
the endless parade, zoom out, in zoom,
Details on details, thick, piled high.

Cellular seedpods pulsing pure time,
Flowering brains clone families of minds
that revel in thinking to the Infinite edge,
agog over life, and love of knowledge.

Whether, a quasar, a hand, a DNA strand,
Fantastic journeys in the Minds of Millions.

Flowers in the Sky

 


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4.

Poetry: New Under the New...
A Frame of Someplace

When and where was the poem born?
Not by the shores of Potholes reservoir
but out of the Clam cracked open by the Raven?
The poem spoke of itself much more
but poetry is Not, seemingly, unclaimed

Not the proper subject of the poem itself,
but the mystical magic of well born Words

Revealing something New under the New
words torn from Stevens' soul Supreme
Non-Fictions imagined in Connecticut,
or from fishing on a Florida boat,
or served up by the Queen of Sour Cream;

The poem contains a touch of mystery,
a pound of flesh, a frame of someplace.

 

 

5.

More Images, Less Fluff

In 2000 time, a former colleague of mine
mailed me an anthology of Imagist poetry.
In 1913 time, Pound and Addington chimed:
nouns not adjectives, directness like tea,

ample individuality, precise exact words,
don’t do this or that, focused on the facts,
down to earth, pointed, a tough sharp Axe,
real, modern, urban, fresh, clear, fast.

They did not favor Rhymes most of the time
coz it was buzz love fuzz above outdoes
their calls for hard direct expression above
the rattle and skip-step of sounds abuzz.

Advocates for the perfect photograph in words.
Snapshots, Directshots, captured Blackbirds.

 

 

6.

Fumble Fingers

Of things mechanical
I've little ken,
I fumble and fuss
from start to end.

Where a mechanic
pushes right
I pull left till
things stick-tight.

Bending things
I shouldn't bend,
unfortunately,
till they ain't right.

It's just so, so it is,
fumble fingers my fate it is.

 

 

7.

The Bellies of Chevies

 

 

Gleaming Gas Pumps in the fluorescent night.
Silent Slaves of the Almighty Dollars,
Pouring high-priced high-octane gallons
Into the bellies of Chevies.

Ding! Ding! Gallons go down.
Wallets open and fold.
Customers piss, buy coffee, stretch and go.
Less waiting lately from more oil embargoes.

Headlights come and go, flashing
By the drying Lakes of Petro.
Acid fogs melt steel-belted moons.
Smog smothers a baby soul.

A Dead End ahead, everywhere,
For US, for OPEC, for Fords. Beware!

 

 

8.

Will Cherished Ideals Survive

No Guarantees that to the End
Our cherished ideals will survive,
Our great great grandchildren will thrive,
Our monuments stand ...
             Our guarantees?

This tree my great great grandmother planted,
This dog-eared Leaves of Grass on my desk,
This classic folksong on my breath,
This heirloom apple in my hand ...

             This day,
             no guarantees
             for or against.
             Good!    So we strive on,
Their and our hopes in our hands now.

 

 

9.

Dreams of Gertrude Jekyll's
Munstead Wood Garden

My plush green oversized chair
held my big body up in the air
as I stared out the side window
admiring my evergreen jardin lindo
thinking of design ideas

slipping into a lazy nap
dreampt of imaginative gardens

wandering by Monet's Lilly pond
amazed by Merwin's huge Palm garden
impressed by Hass's Apples in Olema
stunned by the Ryoan-Ji Rock garden
impressed by Jekyll's Munstead Wood

Then, I awoke, with a start,
walked outside and watered.

 

 

10.

Duplicate Webpages Not Loading

At midnight came the light
boxes of text in webpages so heavy
Word Press up and running tonight
shining rainbow graphics say it's ready
to beam up by FTP, webpages Up

Websites multiply like mosquitoes
cold Tick-Tok posts on bare kitchen tables

Poems by Billy Collins rearranged
random dog-baby interactions
Warhol's duplicating tomato photo pots
filled with red MAGA cap's hot frost
bigger women build a Brick House

Facebook not loading in the Mohave
Deserts of blank Internet emptiness

[Garofalo Sonnet Form:
5 2 5 2: Quintain Couplet Quintain Couplet]

 

 

11.

A Game of Words Working

Can one play chess without a Queen?
Can one play soccer without a ball?
Can we think without using words?
Can we Be without the All?

One idea-thing stands on Many Things.
Part and parcel ain’t enough it seems
to satisfy the Whole Purists in any scene.
Gestaltist's try to clarify what they mean.

Take something away, something new stays.
Change the Rules, a fresh game ensues.
Play with a handicap, no Queen for you.
Draw a picture and just view and stew.

A web of the uses of words in daily life
Entangles our understandings. Right?

 

 

12.

Flags Hang at Half-Mast

Patriotism ripens till rotten
and the Stink of Revenge
Perfumes the victory prayers
or pathetic platitudes intoned.

Flesh falls from bones.
Sons become tombstones.
Mothers moan, Fathers groan.
Broken hearts in empty homes.

The military graveyard
needs mowing now—
not a soul in sight
until after midnight.

America Attacks—
flags hang at half-mast

 

 

13.

The Pokeweed Sutra

I saw the sunflower
tall by the railroad tracks
where Ginsberg and Kerouac laughed,
and heard the horn of an oncoming train
and passed a joint of seedy pot

Dazed-dozed-stoned on cannabis contented
marveled at the big clumps of green pokeweed

A common weed with a
reputation of toxicity;
like human beings gripped by greed,
or mercenaries killing for drugs and green money,
or politicians lying through their dirty teeth;

but, while intoxicated on Weed, injuring their heartbeat;
they ignored the advice of the Buddhist's Fifth Precept.

 

 

14.

Crash, Smashed!

In a Bakersfield tule fog we huddled indoors
waiting-waiting-waiting
for Hwy 99 to clear for travel.
Hopefully, we could safely go on to Fresno;
after that blinding opaque fog unraveled.

I had listened to tales from my nephew, a cop,
    and read about
999 fatal accidents on Hwy 99, and scores more
in the Ag-Cities of the San Joaquin Valley
    over many decades past.

In 1974 it became personal!
We were notified:
that my Grandmother Blaize, age 89,
    had been run over and Killed
by a drunk driver on a Fresno night.
Her crushed bloody body found under a car
    outside of a Church dance hall.

At Grandma’s closed casket funeral in Fresno,
the family all quiet, mourning, still—
We silently said our goodbyes.
Grandma Blaize on our minds till we too die.

Whether it’s James Dean smashed in a crash,
or Mabel Blaize run over by a drunk,
car drivers and cars and fogs are killers.
We know the risks, face the facts, shudder.

 

 

 

15.

Vampires in the Hoh Forest

The Town of Forks hosts Vampires,
teenage blood suckers on the night prowl, and
teenage Werewolves howling, running fast.
Humans afraid of these creatures’ wrath.

Human, not so human, called by the Night,
confused, resisting, teenagers losing the fight
against inner demons and lusty needs
and ordinary life with real human beings.

Many beings eat, fight and kill to survive;
wily, tricky, stealthy, with a hunter’s pride.
The Horned God has history on his side.
From our Hungers there is no place to hide.

Hungers keep us all on the Edge,
ready to amorally pounce from a hedge
and slaughter or harvest creatures just ahead.
We are all Vampires rising from the dead.
Its said,
Living and dying scenes in a vivid Red.

 

 

16.

Valentine's Day Knocked on the Door

I am gifted memories
so that I might see
a vase of yellow roses
in dreary February.

Valentine's Day knocked hard on our wood door.
She laughed at the the card I bought from the store.
Dried yellow roses in a Chinese vase by the door.
I tried very hard not to be such a bore.

Our pleasant chat went well, I thought;
very grounded, very friendly— Hot!
Beckoning us both to Lust's Bonfire Blaze
burning a white hole in Valentine's day.

Later, she turned to leave, and all was well.
She left for work; and that broke the Spell.

 

 

17.

Candles Burning Bright

 


You shared the spark,
You fanned the flame,
You fed the fires,
You passed the Names.

For all those known,
For all those unnamed,
We raise this Toast
With thanks this day.

May your days be pleasant,
May your love unfold,
May your community hold,
May our Earth be loved, and

Please, do good for others,
Promptly, for our time is measured cold.

 

 

18.

Golfo de las Américas

King T commanded everyone to say
"Gulf of America" Not "Gulf of Mexico"
No matter what all the maps might display.
Better, Gulf of the Americas, si o no.

King T fires employees every day
Especially if you get in his way.
He knows well about bankruptcy,
Fraud, lies, legalese; so others can't see.

King T Orders: Open the Valves
Tap the "unlimited water" from
Canada and the Northwest.
Unlimited water is a myth.

King T is the Commander in Chief,
Head Honcho, President. Good grief!

 

 

19.

Homework: Home and Work

Standing, sitting, lying down
always moving up and down.
Looking, feeling, listening now;
smelling tasty cornbread chow.

Two good arms and handy hands
triple the powers of ordinary man.
Combining with machines set right
we can be productive day and night.

Reading novels or playing games.
Listening to jazz being played.
Watching detailed TV travel docs.
Falling asleep at eleven o’clock.

Dreamt about the Big Problems at Work!
Suddenly! Woke Up! Yuck, Homework!

 

 

20.

Stopping in Coos Bay

Over the McCollough Bridge way
I just arrived to play in Coos Bay.
Going today to my yurt camp
at Sunset Bay on Arrago Way.

As expected on a February day
rain on the roads, fog over the bay.
The winter air and brisk wind
chilled my bones and fingers thin.

The buildings were glazed green-gray
from moss, mists, fogs and rain
showing their dusty logging days
when the deep-sea cargo ships came.

I walked out on the bouncing dock walks;
gazed at the big McCollough Bridge a lot.

Smiled at the fishermen passing by;
sipped a cafe mocha; wistful, sighed.

 

 

21.

Breathing In...Breathing Out

Negative tides expose the rocks
King tides close the docks,
sea coming in, unceasing
sea going out, predictably.

Breathing In, Breathing Out
Essential, Quintessential

Of all living beings all about:
birds in sky, fish in lakes,
snails on greens, monkeys in trees,
girls in cafes on Fourth Plain,
yogi's in robes on Thanksgiving Day.

Breathe and Move, Move and Be.
Can't move? Can't Breathe? Deadly!

 

 

22.

Awakening: Wednesday, 2/5/2025, 3:33 am

From the depths of my restless shallow sleep
My crusty eyes fluttered and blinked so slow
My fine dream scenes disappeared like snow
Melting on Rem Mountains wide and steep

I tried to remember those passing fancies
those jumbled meandering dreamlike flashes
those jerks and shudders over things fantastic
those jagged memories flowing fast

I stirred and stretched and opened my eyes
my mouth was a cotton ball of spit all dry
my back ached again on that damn left side
the bed creaked as I shifted where I lie

Too early to get up, turn on the lights, and read?
Or, fall back asleep, and birth more dream seeds?

 

 

23.

The Ringing Gong

my zazen was writing
pencil in hand
sitting still for minutes
    no special breathing
        just moving my hand

Holding my eyes fixed on a Stellar Jay
sitting on the top of the wooden back gate

Opened the Gateless Gate,
    creaking hinges sang,
a narrow passage opened;
    saw a iron Temple Gong
never ever rung.

Held the gong mallet in my right hand,
Swinging hard, imagined the Gong rang.

 

 

24.

The Pleasures of Masochistic Conundrums

the fact is that some philosophers enjoy
the rush of mental masochism,
the bondage to fashionable ideas,
the titillations of traditions,
the painful flagellation with

the keen, clear, sharp cutting words,
the bowing to Mistress Logic,
the humiliation of utter confusion,
the euphoria of the games,
the illusions of obsessions,

the charms of the fantastic
the theaters of thought alluring,
the submission to
the non-experiential concepts,
the fetishes of errors and illusions.

 

 

25.

Hunted in the Night

In the bowels of darkness, grim and cold,
the heads of the hunted turned,
young and old;
Fearing the rattle in the weeds.

White teeth,
Prowling predators, hard claws unsheathed.
Ears up listening, listening, still as knives,
Fangs barred, dripping tongues, hungry eyes.

Coyotes did their yap-yap howl
Mice and rabbits in holes hide
Raccoons and possums growled
Bats flew fast from side to side

The Killer-Hunters are on duty now
In the night, the Night, knowing how.

 

 

26.

Flipped Over in the Turning Sands

affecting all the molecules in me
the pull of the moon and sea
feeling the call to walk the shore
Smiled, opened the door

tides and time sent signals to me
to step nimbly over epiphanies
seen flipped over in the turning sands
Surprised, opened my hands

waiting for nobody but me
a fleck of cold fire
flung out on this fleck of space
Sang out, Loved this Place

I picked up a shiny pebble
intricate, Green with Spots of Yellow

 

 

27.

Awake in the Darkness

The Night waited patiently
turning Time to and fro
quietly seeking dawn's glow
while raindrops caressed trees

Cold breezes knocked fences
branches bent and buckled
Time both stopped and started
crawling slowly to Dawn's ascension

Pre-Dawn thoughts slowly uttered
seemed insightful, mostly not,
random images, soggy plots,
impotent ideas, platitudes buttered

Finally, the sun broke the impasse.
Time was unchained to roll at last.

 

 

28.

Empty Beer Cans on the Golf Course

Nectaries overripe mushy
closed doors open in Coos Bay
mortgage payment missed today
knocking Trump off his high horse
skipping over a dead golf course

Emptying words from the back of his car
answers in the back of the book

Home late for bean soup supper
rocky scramble down Mt. Starr
doing doughnuts in horse-around cars
peeing in my pants despite my hustle
laughing at self-strumming guitars

Finding meaning in empty jars
fortune cookies fake fortunes reading

 

 

29.

Double Visions

An eager face staring into the Rich silence
Of mirrored space devoid of mind;
Not projecting or connecting, but reflecting.
Supreme non-fictions, Things
Naked as they are, as they are.

Inevitably, as sunshine blares on stones,
Green erupts from Brown.
Curiousity Swings across the Mind
past junkyards of ideas, peeling metaphors,
rusting rhymes, and concrete cliches,

Into the Center of Imagination City!
We are as we are:
Twofolds, Fourfolds, Eightfolds of
Realities and Possibilities.
Pushing on. Pushing on!

 

 

30.

Clear Cut

 

A. Before and Ongoing

Clear-Cut ------------------------------------
               sunburnt shrubs, oozing stumps,
               raw bulldozer Ruts ::::::::::::::

 

 

 

B. Now and Ongoing

We replant more seedling trees every year:
52 million a year in Washington forests,
158 million a month all around the world,
7 thousand replanted every minute.
I planted 200 trees in my lifetime.
Others saved treasured trees in cities.
Julia Butterfly Hill protested for 738 days
high on a loved old-growth redwood tree.
Kenny Chaplin, Wangari Maathai, Li Xiuzhu,
Johnny Appleseed, Constantino Aucca Chutas,
Aila Keto, John Muir, Jadav Payeng,
Saalumarada Thimmakka, Adrien Taylor ...
Tree Huggers, Tree Heroes, Tree Savers,
Tree Planters!! I Salute these Green saviors.

The Weyerhaeuser Company planted 6 billion trees
for many decades fostering sustainability.

 

 

31.

On the Trail to Arrago Point

Crooked cane, big backpack
Two bottles with fresh water
Trail food gorp in a blue bag
Compass and phone at hand

Map in my front pocket
Extra clothes in the pack
Tools for nature studies
Time for it to happen.

Warm coat, cabby cap
Good boots, wool socks.
Steep trails to tide pools
Tired back, cricky knee

So, I stopped the hike at last,
being sensible, headed back.

 

 

32.

The Dice of Days

Life’s a gamble every day
The Future ... our open doors
The Present is only one day
The Past offers love and lore

The Future: our opened doors
Free rolls of the loaded dice
The Past offers love and lore
Beauty served up straight on ice

Free rolls of the legal dice
Gamble's choice to bet or not
Beauty served at a modest price
Time readily bought and sold

Gambler's choice to take or hold
Sometimes free to bet on me
Time precious bought and sold
Many other depend on me

Sometimes free to just let it be
Chances are the claim of the game
Many others love lucky me
Standing uncertain in the rain

Chance in life are randomly hitched
The Future: opened up useful doors
Standing fast, taking risks,
The Past a fecund changing shore.

 

 

33.

Riddles Unraveled

The fire fell in love when it found its perfect match.
He named his two watch dogs: 'Timex and Rolex.'
Your age: always higher, never lower.
Why is this Gold Fish so expensive?
What's another word for "Thesaurus?"

A shoe that has a tongue but cannot talk.
Trees access the Internet by logging in.

Tomorrow comes but never arrives.
A Christmas tree has many needles but does not sew.
People give their mistakes a name: 'Experience.'
A telephone has many rings but no fingers.
A yardstick has three feet but cannot walk.

A shoe that has a tongue but cannot talk.
A fire can grow but cannot live.

727 Riddles, Jokes, Brain Teasers

 

 

34.

Snow on Bastendorff Beach

A final word from the cold yurt camp:
the bitter stiffness comes and goes,
21 degrees is just too damn cold,
my fingers burn from Winter’s stamp.

Yesterday, three fishermen talking
     in a Charleston cafe
told of the snow coming tomorrow,
     Thursday;
Snow on Bastendorff Beach
beyond the north jetty of Coos Bay.
You have got to be kidding,
glassy snow on the way?

I gathered up all my camping gear
well before daybreak and packed;
found a way to get it all stacked
in tightly in the old Ford’s rear.

I confess, the Hard Cold Beat me Down.
     So I quit, and
left the Sunset Cove yurt campground
     on that Wednesday morn
in the chilly daybreak without making
     hardly a sound.
Headed to my warm home in Vancouver now!

 

 

35.

Poetry and the Grim Reaper

Often, poets speak of Death,
the endings unceremoniously passing on,
penning Elegies for dear friends past,
acknowledging their heroes long gone,
crying over dear loved ones lost,
saluting soldiers dying in their prime,
cheering when their enemies bite the dust,
lamenting their parents final days,
facing their own dead coming today.
The finality, the irreversibly,
the inevitability, the objectivity...
Hard to bear; the indignity, the
Pain, the Sorrow, everyone's Fate.
All men are mortal. Logically, and You.

 

 

36.

Paradoxical Considerations

Dividing by math into the decimal’s depths
Leaves the Tortoise always one-step less.
Stopped by a perplexed infinite regress;
The Hare’s running to a marathon death.

She knows heroin and cocaine will kill her,
Her pleasures propel her to pay for more.
She can hardly stand, sits on the floor.
Finally, dying suddenly, payback occurred.

Supreme Fictions live on and on for most
who say they believe in Holy Ghosts who
will escort them to Heaven to get their due
for doing nothing but buttering toast.

Lots of puzzles and problems at Life’s door.
Paradoxically, we always crave for more.

 

 

 

37.

Marriage Misaligned

A gold ring dulled by time
Marking one marriage misaligned.
Broken promises rip up minds.
Lies increased but did not rhyme.

Overspending broke the weakened chains.
Yelling and cussing split their brains.
Arguing for hours to make their claims.
They seldom agreed and were not ashamed.

 

 

38.

Steigerwald Wildlife Refuge

Soggy soils at the Steigerwald Refuge tempting
thousands of geese, ducks, and birds to feed
in tall grasses, trees, and on the seeds of weeds
next to the Columbia River endlessly so running

Stepping though the muddy puddles slimy grime
on the hint of a trail to the Columbia levee’s line
we zipped on a raincoat as the drizzle fell down
marveled at the many kinds of birds all around

Sitting on the levee at the shins of the Cascades
watching barges slowly follow the Columbia’s way
to the Portland-Longview big ship docks today
while a kite-boarder rips a spinner in fast play

The quacking and tweeting rose to a din
while the River seem silent, hiding within

 

 

39.

Fourteen Acts I Do Every Day
at 8o Years of Age

Get Up, Stand, Move; Plan
Eat breakfast; Think
Talk with my wife; Listen
Read, Learn; Reflect
Tend to our garden, Smile; Wonder

Write, Web Publish, Journal, Blog; Communicate
Enjoy Walking, Exercise; Encourage Others

Mind My Own Business; Work
Play Music, Dance, Art; Energize
Do Household Chores, Help; Contribute
Clean my Body, Drink Water; Purify
Socialize; Communicate for Peace

Eat Lunch and/or Dinner; Gratitude
Sleep; Dream

 

 

40.

Beginner's Luck and Junior's Gone:
I Move On
.

I began studying Sonnets for the first time in my life in the winter of 2020.
I studied the literary commentators, teachers, and Sonnet master guides.

I was an old man in 2020, 74 years old and surprised that I was still alive.
I could still lift a pencil, walk, garden, read, write, laugh, listen, thrive.

My brother-in-law, Junior P, died today, 2025, in Indiana, at the age of 87.
Mr. Alzheimer and Mrs. Pneumonia escorted him to Baptist Heaven.

I imagined writing everyday, a ritual of awakening.
I pretended I was a poet, a Lit-Head Hip hipster, a cool author in disguise.

We know a few who said a prayer to the good Baptist God, before Junior died.
We hope God listened and told Barbara, Junior's late wife, that God too cried.

I read and read, listened, took notes, memorized phrases, studied hard.
I thought about Sonnets, their history, their forms, their great bards.

So, I picked up a pencil and started to write a amateur's sonnet;
Floundered, could not get the words just right;
so I let it stew for awhile. Then, returned to write.

 

 

41.

Freed the Criminals

King T promised to daily Strive
to cut our Government down to size
castrate Departments and Agencies
eliminate benefits people use to survive.

He grants pardons to convicted felons
MAGA Insurrectionists from Jan 6th,
Right-Wing White Boys, yelling-trashing
People injured and dying on the Capitol floor.

King T busy telling everyone
what to Do to be in his good favor;
or else he will Do Bad This or Bad That
to your people, until you obey.

Busy, bossy, rich King T will go
until his stone-cold heart finally blows snow.

 

 

42.

Ellos son Gente Loca

Don't give him a GUN!
     EL ESTA LOCO
     EL VIA A MATAR
               SAL DE AQUI
     drugged on crack

Boken candle bottles on the Church floors
     CHEVrolet Stalled (ROTO)
boats SuNk (OceANO)
          WoLvEs HunT (Blood-Sangre)
SHOOTing STAr (LUNA)

Drinker's drunk at a smelly bar (Long Beach)
          A loose woman with little charm.
Fat men puke into the toilet bowl.
          ELLOS SON GENTE LOCA (crude)
! Vámonos de aqui ! ! Out of here !

BU1783

 

 

43.

Stoners Roost on Highway 99

In Vancouver, the Washington rain seldom ends
in winter when the trees and shrubs are gray
and thin. We wear coats and sweaters indoors
and stay cozy warm, dry, and often High.

Highway 99 goes right through our town;
It’s Main Street, paralleling Interstate 5.
Main Street Marijuana is Open
     Everyday, from 8 am to 11 pm.
Selling pot to Stoners on the prowl.

He shops there every Thursday for Cannabis,
sativa and indica, mixes, pre-rolled, on Sale;
10 1/2 gram pre-rolled joints for $15.00.
Redbird Sour Diesel for $1.50 a spliff; Yes!

At home: comfy, dry, relaxing, reading, Stoned.
Mainstreetmarihuana is a small part
     of his much larger Home.

Highway 99 and Interstate 5

 

 

44.

A Down's Talking: Da Da Da Da...

Two brothers and one sister playing
on the campground park paths.
Laughing and running very fast.
Howling like coyotes courting.

One shouts “Run!” The others laugh.
The little girl stutters,
“dada dada dada dada
rara rara rara rara”
Likely, a Down’s special-mind child.

At 4am the girl screams in her yurt.
Night terrors wrenched her soul.
Her mother tried her best to console.
Her brothers woke up and looked hurt.

Unaware of her handicapped future,
families try their best to fill in for her.

Coos Bay, Oregon

 

 

45.

Arbitrary Associations Impending

Combining useful and not
was an activity he often fought.
Because, frequent repetition of
two variables, often led to
associations undesirable

He ate fried foods while he wrote,
soon he could not write sans Fritos.
He smoked while he worked,
soon he could not continue to work
without taking many a toke.

Associations like glue sticks and binds
creating connections and habits
he never expected at any time,
they multiplied like mice in his mind.

Break connections, divorce associations,
     rally behind a his new he.
Avoiding these random associations,
     he becomes free.

 

 

46.

What We All Eat

The snail slides over the leaves,
eating hardily. The hummingbird
flits anxiously from flower to flower.
The spider wraps her web around
a dying little moth. The squirrel
steals a peanut from the feeder.
My dog digs up a mole. A coyote
pounces on a rabbit. A bear
sucks up pounds of huckleberries.
Pigs feast on grain and slop.
Giraffes eat 66 pounds each day
of Acacia leaves. She savors a
juicy hot burrito from Taco Bell.
I eat fried Hamma Hamma oysters in Olympia.

 

 

47.

Foot the Bill for Your First

My poem was posted to my Cloud Hands Blog,
150 people actually read it, I think.
Thoreau could not sell his copies of Walden Pond.
Ezra Pound, nearly broke, self-published A Lume Spento.
Marcel Proust footed the bill for Swan's Way.
Confidence in yourself is essential;
Keep on going, Work, invest in Your Creativity.
Most will fail to gain much notoriety!
Most will not sell their poetry books!
Their intimate creations will just gather dust!
But, unless you place your bet, and
toss the dice on the crap table of public poetry,
you will have failed in your Sharing Quest.
Ready, Set, Place Your Bet!

 

 

48.

Places Covered in Time

A gold wedding ring fell off
my skinny wet index finger.
Ikkyü kissed a pretty whore,
Basho walked 15 kilometers in the snow.
Las Vegas in 1967 was not heaven,
Rod Serling died in the Twilight Zone,
Jim Henson's Muppets cried when he died.
Terrorists stopped World Trade on 9/11.
The COVID lockdown closed Church doors;
Coroner's trucks filled with iced souls.
Meanwhile, life went on and on.
Red Bluff summers were hot as hell;
I taught yoga at the local fitness gym.
Portland in May, rhododendrons in bloom.

 

 

49.

Staying Near Home

Back packed to the Mt. Whitney Summit
Body surfed at Zuma Beach
At Green Gage plums in June
Decorated and hid colored East eggs.
Another day, where will we go. Say,
lets just stay at home, watch the 49ers play,
smoke some fine Sour Diesel today,
don't fly to Florida for the sweating sun.
Shovel compost and manure to fertilize,
Jump in Whiskeytown Lake in May,
hike to the Sierra Alpine hut on Mt. Shasta.
Fume with Death in the Duino Elegies,
Rilke never walked up Mt. Ranier.
I did not seek answers I would not use.

 

 

50.

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51.

Dimensions of the Known

He was a hot head.
She was cold as ice.
It was the end of the line.
We are armies of the night.
They were hard pressed.

Consciousness rises as language grows,
Metaphors expand the dimensions of the Known.

Cars are gas guzzlers.
Forests were enchanting ghosts.
Men were oxen on yokes.
Maps were essential Keys
Rivers were twisting snakes.

This was that, figuratively.
That was this, comparatively.

 

Metaphors are unceasingly born
Growing like leaves in February
From Imaginative fecund roots
Connecting disconnected images
of That and This, figuratively.

 

52.

One Picture of Me


This bony skull of mine
electrified
pictured onscreen for me.
     Doctor recommends
     some oral surgery.

The brain disappeared,
an empty space
sliced from
X Ray images retraced.
Eyeless in inner space.

Monkey nose holes,
bony eye glasses,
teeth glowing in the dark.
     Inner spaces never seen
     underneath my very being.

Skinless, noseless, earless,
a shape, a form—
     the images informed.
Stripping away the unneeded,
revealing my inner core.

 

 

53.

Bloodless Sea

The bloodless sea—
     painted red tides
gathered triple toxins
spewed wavy purple streaks
on bays and beaches we see

The bloodless sea—
picturing crashing white waves
bulldozing the thick brown sand
reshaping the shorelines destiny
relentlessly, impulsively, creatively

The bloodless sea—
written about by poets for centuries
     rudely calling my bluff
challenging me aggressively
pushing me past my petty me

 

 

54.

Typographical Notes

Totally Awake :
4 am - 10 am !
     Results Shown =
What's Known ?
Actual Cost Code $

On a Saturday .
I left a footnote *
     Left Path Slanted /
Pragmatically Bracketed [
Fill in the blanks ______

     & expressed in words on pages —
revealing, appealing, shared ...
Weighty Subjects #
Rising Higher ^
Here and Now @

 

 

55.

A Flotsam of Unknowns

Under the Water
of my mind
an unconscious Sea
of Memories
guide me through time

Keep me on a course line
send me some signs
become conscious at times...
freedom may a fiction be
controlled by unknown destinies.

Bring the Unconscious,
Sub-Conscious, ego, and Id,
Collective Unconscious figured in—
Over the waves of Consciousness
the flotsam of Unknowns are adrift.

The Gushen Grove Sonnets

Quintain Poetry

 

56.

Handouts for the Hungry

seagulls search
the parking lot
for handouts
from humans
on asphalt ground

stray dogs
wandeer around
nostrils twitching
hunting for food
begging for handouts

"Arid fields
the only life
necks of cranes."
- Shiko

 

 

57.

Time Teases

Time is a non-symbolic beingness
Signifying what it is, what Is
Beyond its misnamed Names.
Pointing to Change, Motion, Acts, Facts.
Being integral to birth and death.

Fleeting attributes slip, don't stick,
It nature is not nondescript,
It comes and goes like scheduled planes
Slips by my tongue, rules my brain,
It turns pages in the Book of Life.

Enchanting more than understanding
Time teases with new possibilities
All creations are divisions of past things
A splitting up of Reality into Temporarily
The fiction of the Now stabilizes Being.

BU2969, TTT 14.2

A Brief History of the Philosophy of Time.
By Adrian Bardon, 2024.

A Companion to the Philosophy of Time.
Edited by Heather Dyke, Blackwell, 2015.

Time - Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy

 

 

58.

Grinding Time

running out of time
for catching up
    with the future
now
a problem

        my mind grinds
        my times
into memories
so fine
they disappear

To dance at the still point
Of the Time beyond time,
Beyond pasts, within futures,
this Moment
Now and forever, beyond minds.

 

 

59.

Ghosts on the Streets

I was a ghost
strolling in the foggy morn
on wet black asphalt city streets,
assuming I'm invisible to oncoming cars,
ignored by two passerbys.

Staying safe close to the curb.
Listening to dogs barking-screams
(warning me or begging me to let them free).
Listening to a few people talking
totally ignoring irrelevant me.

Just a solitary ghost moving silently,
close to my footsteps following me
going slow, slowing but going,
thinking of not much but poetry,
Hidden away from the world and me.

I am a ghost
of walking memories
a past embodied in me
a past only visible to me
a past defining the real actual me.

 

 

60.

Fictions of the Now

Time is a non-symbolic being
Signifying what it is
     Beyond its misnamed Names.
Pointing to Change, Motion, Acts, Facts.
Being integral to birth and death

Fleeting attributes slip, don't stick,
     It nature is not nondescript,
It comes and goes like scheduled planes
Slips by my tongue, rules my brain,
It turns pages in the Book of Life.

Enchanting more than understanding
     Time teases with new possibilities
All creations are divisions of past things
A splitting up of Reality into Temporarily
The fiction of the Now stabilizes Being.

 

 

61.

On This Day

On this day the world began.
A buzzard circled overhead.
A plane settled for a soft land.
A cook fried potatoes in a pan.
Happy dogs went out to play.

A crippled man put on his socks
On this day the world began
A drunk man could not stand.
A salesclerk totaled up our tab.
A child in class raised his hand.

A calendar outlined our plans.
Brushed her teeth, combed her hair.
He came in 5th, an also-ran.
On this day the world began.

 

 

62.

The Artful Use of Time

When people often read, they change.
When people pay close attention, they change.
When people practice mindfulness, they change.
When people step back and carefully observe, they change.
When we are changed, the artful life emerges.

Keep a little distance
from everyday eyes, less practicality,
a psychic distance, aloofness,
and objects will emerge as art
producing new insights and suprises.

Our changing experiences
Overlaid with organic meaning fine
Art in your everday experiences
Enriching our unfolding lives---
Music invites us to Dance.

BU3385

Art and Its Significance
An Anthology of Aesthetic Theory, 1994

Art and Experience, John Dewey, 1932

 

 

63.

Art As Experience

When people often read, they change.
When people pay close attention, they change.
When people practice mindfulness, they change.
When people step back and carefully observe, they change.
When we are changed, the artful life emerges.

Keep a little distance
from everyday eyes, less practicality,
a psychic distance, aloofness,
and objects will emerge as art
producing new insights and suprises.

Our changing experiences
Overlaid with organic meaning fine
Art in your everday experiences
Enriching our unfolding lives---
Music invites us to Dance.

BU3385

Art and Its Significance
An Anthology of Aesthetic Theory, 1994

Art As Experience, John Dewey, 1932

 

 

64.

Seeing with Joanne's Eyes

April 1st, 2026, 2:09 am, Vancouver
Reading Joanne Kyger's, As Ever, 2002

Confusing words can communicate,
inform, resonate, deeply relate.

Meandering Around Some Ratty Harbor

disconnected tidbits
random images
idling impressions
wakes of smashed cookies
asides about Achilles, Ganesha, or Mother God.

surrealistic ramblings clever undefined,
attics of royal rubbish filling up,
typographically scattered words awry,
zigzagged misdirections --- fuzzy eyes,
meandering locutions about disheveled scenes.

riding snakes on sunny nights
steam pipes hissing nonsense tonight
murdering meaning line by line 212
name dropping mimicked poets 160, 212
gets no credit for rare poetic insights 250


"WALKING ALONE IN THE DARK
I RESOLVE TO PROCEED SLOWLY"

Are we looking forward
to her washing her hair? 78
Want to learn about her
social calendar for the day? 82
Hurrying up to do the laundry? 85

While a little brownie's servant of sand
dances to the bottom of the bland. 89
Did her head really bang on the subject? 92
Really? Some things open, some things closed. 94
Yes, I agree, she is everybody. 101

What did you eat for breakfast, after smoking a joint? 122
Held to be exhausted and deranged. 142
Time is a nice thing to go there. 207
A hideous mish mash of inheritance. 167

Maybe I'm just a stupid macho male
unappreciative of feminine insights,
not sensitive to most womens' daily grind;
maybe so, maybe that's right---
Or, maybe I just don't like most of her poetry tonight.

Yes,
I did like, by Joanne Kyger:
Up My Coast: Legends of the Bolinas Native People, pp. 177-180
Destruction: Bear, p.182

BU3397

 

 

65.

Oulipo Experiments

$ $ $ @ @
* ? ! - *
5 4 3 2 1
# ; : / "
[ ] ( ) /
         
@ @ @ $ $
* - = + _
1 2 3 4 5
{ } ^ % "
~ ` & * #
         
5 4 3 2 1
# ; : / "
{ } ^ % "
t h e n d

BU3469

Oulipo Movement

 

 

66.

Three Quintains at Day

Some say
I am obsessed
with publishing three quintains
every day for four long years
And today

Not obsession
just a pleasing habit
just a creative mode of expression
just a focused form of meditation...

Some say
I am dedicated
to opening up brevity
to exploring the edges of poetry
Consistently

BU3459

Bundled Up: 2021-2025

 

 

67.

What is Good Company?

I enjoy reading experts
on various subjects,
just to listen and learn.
Am I an introvert, or
a seeker of knowledge and expertise?

I don't need the company
of the uneducated, ordinary, or TV.
Because, everyone has limited time.
They live their lives, and
I live mine. Separately.

Being an introvert
is fine by me.
I'm not a misanthrope or lonely.
I enrich my days
reading science, philosophy, and poetry.

Introversion and Extroversion

Reading

BU3462

 

 

68.

The Day My Religion Started to Die

I've had a few people
tell me, to my face,
that I was going to hell
because
I was not going to church

In the 1957 sixth grade, my teacher,
a stern Catholic nun (towards boys)
told the entire class:
My grandmother and I
were going to Hell (her emphasis!)

Because we attended her
Lutheran Church on last Sunday.
Shocked, upset, and annoyed was I!
My grandmother was a good person.
Catholicism, for me, on that day died.

My Views on Religion

Humanism

Non-Religious Persons in the USA

 

 

69.

Feathers in the Weeds

Flimsy as a feather
Hairs tough for a tether
For hooking to the sticky seeds
Caught in dry August weeds.
The feather stuck and twisted

Bounced, shook, and resisted
Stuck tight day and night
Beautiful, quite a sight
Feather, Weeds, and Seeds
Summertime intricacies

Of star thistles in my pants
Sticky weeds in my socks. I can't
Imagine the Extravagance
Of seeding plants defiant
Spreading life everywhere

BU2243

 

 

70.

The Hanford Radioactive Blues

Renaissance of Uranium
hidden in the desert sands
moved inward to Hanford
with all the dials and readings
and ample overtime crews.

Radioactivity and Rods were One!
Ambitious sun monsters
Decaying into searing fire
filled with silver steam
buried in the hardest concrete.

Now the barren Hanford land
Covering millions of tons
Of nuclear waste dumped
For the benefit of Posterity.
A Super Fund of deadly radioactivity.

- The Hanford Project in Central Washington 1943-1971

Super Fund Cleanup, Hanford 1980-

Nuclear Waste Storage

The Wreck Ahead Comes Into View

Bu2254

 

 

71.

A Titled Quintain is a Sextet!

One line, the title of the poem, in
Italicized text, at the head of a poem,
Gets the ball rolling, hints at
something sensitive, catches a clue;
Once Upon a Time, headline news.

One line, the title of the quintain, does
Set the Stage, introduces ideas,
Guides expectations, sprinkles
innuendos, catches other clues;
the title's information opens up the New.

Just one extra line, that damn title,
Sticking out like a sore thumb? bum? mum?
Looking like stained underwear drying outdoors.
Suggesting a title for a couplet? what gives?
Like a name tag on a lost dog? Maybe.

BU2077

 

 

72.

Mike Garofalo Writes Lousy Poetry

my cranky realism
bouncing doggerel
pithy reversals
sweets and sours
my prosaic commonplaces

my brevities lacking depth
a disorganized random mess
quantity lacking quality
dull digital scrapbooks
my limited Northwest familiarities

my Romantic infatuations undisguised
jarring rhythmic irregularities
lack of the idealizing language of high poetry
my homespun ho-hum vocabulary...
self-criticism opens one's eyes.

BU3471

 

 

73.

Oulipos Play I

TALL     WIND
TREE     WAYS
WIND    FALL
SWAY     ALLT
FALL      TREE

A tall dead tree fell in the storm wind.
Wind storm felled trees tall and dead.

TALL      SWAY
REET     ALLFF
WDWI    LLTA
YSWA     TREE
FALL      INDW

WIND ORMST LLFE LTAL REET
Nonsense, Yes! Meaning, slim.

BU1545

Harry Matthew's Algorithms: OPPL, p.129

 

 

74.

Time on My Hands

Time, Way         Year, Day
Thing, Day         Person, Man
Person, Man      Thing, Hand
Year, World       World Time
Life, Hand          Life, Way

                  Life, Way
                 Year, Day
                This, Hand
                Person, Man
                World Time

BU1594

Cantos of the Hands

Oulipos Quintain Museum

Quintain Sonnets

 

 

75.

Turn Off the TV

Television: The Corporate Monopoly.
Supporting a billionaire oligarchy.
Consumerist enshitification and greed.
Americans' waste 34 hours watching TV each week
Truthfully, what are they unconsciously watching?

I prefer doing something
constructive, enriching, uplifting...
Rather than sitting dumb and just WATCHING
the endless sports, sitcoms, questionable news,
commercials, crime dramas, talking heads,
UFO and ghost stories, sanitized smut,

Reruns, pay walls, family fights,
Phony survivalists, selling crap...
Banalities, trivialities, stupidities,
unrealities ... I turned off my TV in 2025.

BU1462

Stand Up and Turn Off the TV

 

 

76.

Story of a Day

 

Estoy despiero I'm awake
Estoy en casa I'm at home
Estoy bien I am fine
Estoy listo I'm ready
Estoy ocupado I'm busy
   
Me voy I'm going
Estoy en trabajo I'm at work
Estoy trabajando I am working
Estoy cansado I'm tired
Me voy I'm leaving
   
Estoy en casa I'm at home
Tengo hambre I'm hungry
Estoy descansando I am resting
Estoy felix I'm happy
Tengo sueño I'm sleepy

BU1814

 

 

77.

Campfire at Grayland Beach

Granted, I don't live at the sea.
I'm an inlander, you see, but
living not far from the Pacific
Ocean visited by others and me.

To watch the dark wet sand
splashed by churning surf.
To feel the cold swirling sea
bounce by my knees. Exhilarated

by wave after walls of water waves.
Later, rested, dried off, sitting still
around a campfire pit glowing red;
talking about friends who are dead.

In the cold dark night the sounds
of the surf melted the campfire light.

 

 

78.

Stray Dogs Roadside

I have a difficult task
when writing poetry that
is just clever contrived nonsense...
Green ribbons crawled to sing
Red tulips caused bells to ring

Comely zebras scream cold sardines
Demented senior calls black cats insane
Museums' display paintings of soybeans
Scooters skip from lane to lane
Everybody puzzled by what it all means

Iron skillets freeze his sad eyes
Marshmellow puffs piled in the sky
Dreams I treasure along for the ride
Stray dogs sleeping in bushes roadside.

BU1853

 

 

79.

Satisfied in Many Ways

Loving
Happy
Content
Pleasing
Smiling

Delighted
Satisfied
Cheerfulness
Sensual
Enjoyment

Euphoria
Gratifying
Satiated
Optimistic
Intelligent

BU3503

Two, Three, Four Syllables

 

 

80.

Cruel Men

She marched on No-Kings Day
No matter what her cold hearted husband said,
or his evangelistic preacher said.
She had courage, she had grit!
Then her mean MAGA husband hit her with is fists.

Later, she found him naked in her
twelve year old daughter's bed,
enjoying sodomy while she bled.
What will Mom do?
She was so shocked and very afraid.

She got the gun and reloaded it,
Packed a few clothes, took her daughter,
Drove to the police station gate!
Determined, strong, head high, both safe...
Earlier she had shot him in the face.

BU3495

 

 

81.

Time Travel to the Outskirts of Words

     Objects are Intertwined:
Inter-breeding like space and time
Inter-acting like brain and mind
Inter-relating like the drummer and the band
Inter-lacing like fingers and hand

     Time is Objectified:
Counted, tallied, recorded, traded;
Clock hands moving, telling time;
Carrion bells singing hours at nine---
Time eats everything; Objects dissolve.

     Time is Personified:
Grim Reaper, Stork Baby, Dorian Gray;
Talking Time Machines, Killer Shark AI;
Old man with a crooked gray cane;
Eternal Goddess in a perfectly lazy Sky.

     We travel via Time:
All the time, consistently, logically,
Relentlessly, unavoidably, inexorably...
But, realistically--- Entropy ---
Closes the Past with a slap!

^^ We Only Travel in Time in the Now ^^

     Words, thankfully, are Free
To thumb their noses at reality
To toss time-places-people randomly a'round
To invent a Supreme Fiction for us to See---
To create a timeless Heaven for Eternity.

BU2783

 

 

82.

Lyrical Inductive Path to Uncovering

Here is my method:
poetically inductive,
not a logic proof,
lyrical examples here,
not one case to make a case.

Giving instances,
examples that illustrate,
metaphors that play,
quintains that articulate,
showing time in different ways.

Like a choral group's
song in decent harmony,
and resonating,
these poems jog memories.
Pointing to Time's complexity.

BU3663

Lyric Logic: How Modern American Poetry Reasons.

Garofalo Quintet: 5/7/5/7/7 Form

Inductive Reasoning

 

 

82.

Time on My Hands

Time, Way         Year, Day
Thing, Day         Person, Man
Person, Man      Thing, Hand
Year, World       World Time
Life, Hand          Life, Way

                  Life, Way
                 Year, Day
                This, Hand
                Person, Man
                World Time

 

Cantos of the Hands

Oulipos Quintain Museum

Quintain Sonnets

BU1594

 

 

83.

The Areness of Quidity

Was the topic
the being of Being, or
the Being of beings?
Or, the time of Time, or
the Time of times?

Time-Being intertwined
The timing of Time conceptualized
The Being of beings in lives alive
the times of our lives wherein Being thrives
beings here and now realized.

The theology of the Being of beings
Is muddled, strange, a thicket of thoughts;
impenetrable, trivial, clunky, or false.
The philosophy of the being of Beings,
Likewise, needs a whole new language game.

That subtle isness and whatness
That deep Quidity of a real being,
A unique presence revealed to me,
Slowly over long periods of time,
Areness implicit in changing scenes.

BU3722, TTT 14.4.2.1

Martin Heidegger

 

 

84.

I'm That

"I am that which I am" and
I am that, in some ways, what I am now,
Partly what I was just yesterday, and
Likely what, in many ways, what I will later become.
I am many states of things in time.

[Sort of like divine: spanning a long long time,
but not dream time.]

Theology of God Being

Tautologies

 

Not being a divine being,
I'm sort of out of my league.
But I still play first base in loosing games.

When my earthly mind thinks
about the Divine, by which,
I, via my auto-habit-mind,
Automatically ASSUME
that the Divine Homeland MEANS

to live in a somber spiritual sacred
supernatural stupendous superlative
sovereign, supposedly: quasi-eternal,
Special, Sublime, So and So Land.

Again, out of my league.
Let's Play Here, Game On!! Let's Dance...

Get Down On It, song by Kool and the Gang

 

85.

Title

 

 

 

 

 

Sonnets

Quintain Sequences of Sonnet Length

i.e., The Four Quintain Sonnet Structural Forms
Studies by Mike Garofalo

 

5252 quintain + couplet + quintain + couplet
14 lines, stanzas with rhyme schemes or free verse
Examples: # 600, 904, 968, 1217, 2154, 2229, 2384, 2518, 2528, 2521, 2523
        #2526, 2528, 2532, 2534

Mike Garofalo (5252):
Awakening: Wednesday, 2/5/2025, 3:33 am #2528
Chanting Canyon Streams #1217
Dreams of Gertrude Jekyll's Munstead Wood Garden
#2518
Duplicate Webpages Not Loading #2521
Empty Beer Cans on the Golf Course #2532
Fourteen Acts I Do Every Day at 8o Years of Age #2523
Golfo de las Américas #2526
Listening to Change #2154
On the Road to Eureka #904
playing gods #600
Poetry: New Under the New
Prior Questions for the Tarot #968
The Pokeweed Sutra #2521
Riddles Unraveled #2384
The Ringing Gong #2530
Speaking of Cars Speaking
Spirit Quest in the Sierras # 2579
Steigerwald Wildlife Refuge #2534
Voyager Tarot Candlight Reading
#50

Gushen Grove Sonnets by Michael P. Garofalo


555 quintain + quintain + quintain

15 lines, stanzas with rhyme schemes or free verse

Mike Garofalo Quintain Sonnet Examples 555
Examples: # 92, 932, 933, 939, 1513, 1931, 2006, 2049, 2077, 2099,
# 2131, 2175, 2243, 2254, 2576, 2853, 2925


John Ashbury, A Picture of J. A. in a Prospect of Flowers

Robert Bly:
The Poem
The Chinese Peaks
The Rainy September

Hilda Doolittle (H.D.):
Time has an end you say

William Everson, Jacob and the Angel


Mike Garofalo (555):
Alternatives of Two #2049
Best Way Forward # 2214
The Bloodless Sea #92
The Bottom Line #2175
Criteria for Action #2735
The Day My Religion Started to Die
#2340
Double Visions #933
The Event: Number 16; She Was Fire #2788
A False Call to Men
# 2506
Feathers in the Weeds
#2243
Flotsams of Unknowns
#2303
The Hanford Radioactive Blues # 2254
Here & Now @
#2374
Packed Into Anxiety
#1968
Playing with the Table Box
#2035
The Pleasures of Masochistic Conundrums
#932
Quintains At a Minimum #2576
Running Out of Time
#1513
Sand in my Face #2926
So What If?
#1964
Time Teases # 2969
A Titled Quintain is a Sextet #2077
Bundled Up: Quintain Sonnets: Volume 5
We Spoke Softly
# 2589
The West Edge Tour
# 2925
Will Cherished Ideals Survive
#2229

 

Philip Larkin:
Compline
Hard Lines
The Returning I
Song With a Spoken Refrain
Success Story
Young Woman's Blues

D. H. Lawrence:
Come Spring, Come Sorrow #2853
Turned Down # 2973

Audre Lorde, Love Poem

Marianne Moore, Feed Me, Also, River God

Howard Nemerov:
Date with the Rabbi
First Snow
To the Mannequins
The Vacuum

The Wheel King #2541

Octavio Paz:
Walking Through the Light #2099

Arthur Rimbaud, The Poor Man Dreams #2209

Christina Rosetti, By the Sea

 

William Stafford:
Entering History
Fixers
For a Lost Child
Freedom
The Gift
Haycutters
Ice Fishing
Jeremiah at Miminagish
A Life, a Ritual
A Memorial to My Mother
Midwest
My Mother Was a Soldier
No Praise, No Blame
Over the North Jetty
Right to Die

Security
Stereopticon
Vocation
The Wanderer Awaiting Preferment
Watching the Jet Planes Dive
Whispered in Winter
Witness

Diane Wakoski, Belly Dancer

W. B. Yeats:
The Mother of God
Remorse for Intemperate Speech #2710
The Road at My Door
The Rose of the World
The Stare's Nest in My Window

 

The Gushen Grove Sonnets

Bundled Up: 1,800+ Quintains, by Michael P. Garofalo

 

 

553 quintain + quintain + triplet
13 lines, stanzas with rhyme schemes or free verse
Examples: # 2175, 2241, 2596, 2766, 2770


William Ellery Channing, This is to Be My Symphony #3572

Marge Piercy, Postcard from the Garden

Kay Ryan, The Theft

Mike Garofalo:
The Bottom Line # 2175
Seeing What We Want to See # 2766
Unhitched from the Eternal Now # 2770

Anne Waldman, The Asian Notebook

William Stafford: Across Kansas #2596

 

Quintain Sonnets by Mike Garofalo

Sonnet Form Studies by Mike Garofalo

The Gushen Grove Sonnets

 

 

554 quintain + quintain + quartet

14 lines, stanzas with rhyme schemes or free verse

Mike Garofalo Quintain Sonnet 554 Examples:

# 2654, 2663, 2763, 2764, 2765, 2767, 2768, 2769, 2771

 

Winston Abbott, Blessed Be the Night

Julian Bell:
An Epistle on the Subject Of # 2983

Mike Garofalo:
Dream Time of a Body-Mind # 2768
Five Elements Embracing
# 2763
Flowers in the Skagit Valley # 2767
Here and Gone # 2663
Ice Crystal Streaked # 2771
Mountains Melted # 2764
On this Day # 2935
Pointing in What Direction? # 2769
Radiate the Inner Smile #2654
Waiting: Then Suddenly # 2765

Stéphane Mallarmé, Fan #3537


Soil, sea, sun, rain, sky ...
Five Elements embracing,
Intertwined in mind.
Unfathomable Matrix;
Scaffolds on scaffolds

Grounded in Otherness.
Below sky, gardener, bees, soil,
seeds, leaves, stems, roots, water...
Below wet cells embraced,
Below atoms dancing on Energy...

Deeper and deeper below
Into What?
A Plenitude, a sacredness.
Emptiness in full bloom.
- Mike Garofalo, #2763

 

 

Examples of longer poems using
5 line stanzas extensively or
exclusively:


John Ashbery, Voyage in the Blue

W. H. Auden:
The Decoys
Elegy
Marginalia
Oxford
Prologue at Sixty
The Watchers

Ted Berrigan, Words for Love

Christina Bok, Kalokagathia

Elizabeth Bishop:
Cirque d'Hiver
In a Room
North Haven
Sleeping on the Cieling
The Unbeliver

Billy Collins:
Animal Behavior
Sandhill Cranes of Nebraska
(detail)

Randy Crawford:
I Don't Wanna Be Normal #2310

Robert Creely, Self-Portrait

James Dickey: The Heaven of Animals

Emily Dickinson:
571, 1217, 1221, 1223, 1228

Robert Frost:
Bond and Free
In a Vale

 

Mike Garofalo:

At the Mysterious Pass # 2685
Devil's Lake in Lincoln City #2927b
Drifting to My Mind's Edge #2633
Arbitrary Associations Impending #2536
Bumps in the Logic Road #2760
Crash, Smashed! #2650
Dosewallips on the Fjord #566
The Olympic Curve on Highway 101
One Picture of Me #2620
Pulling Up Onions in April # 2683
Raven Broke Open the Magical Clam
These Dear Friends of the Buddha Mind # 2675
Thou Are Not That # 2679
Time of the Inner Mind #9
Time Travelled to the Outskirts of Words #2783
Vampires in the Hoh Forest #2525
The West Edge Tour # 2925
Winter Rain Returns #1614
Wittgenstein's Remarks #2876

 

Louise Glück, Threshing

Paul Goodman:
The Weepers Towers in Amsterdam

Noah Eli Gordon, The Book of Forgetting

Robert Hayden:
Mystery Boy looks for kin in Nashville

Richard Hugo:
A Chapel Further West than Most
Changes in Policy at Taholah

Josephine Jacobsen:
How We Learn
Language as an Escape from the Discrete
Monosyllables

Gallway Kinnell:
Alewives Pool
To Christ Our Lord

Robert Lowell, Fall 1961

Thomas McGrath, A Letter for Marian

John Milton, Song on a May Morning

Marianne Moore:
A Carriage from Sweeden
The Plumet Basilisk
In the Days of Prismatic Color

Howard Nemerov:
Elegy of Last Resort #2544
The Scales of the Eyes

Frank O'Hara:
Edwin's Hand
Funnies
Hatred
Hunting Horns
My Heat
One Seeing Larry Rivers
On Rachmaninoff's Birthday
Poem
V. R. Lang

Charles Olson:
Gulf of Maine
Some Good News

Octavio Paz:
Ladera Este, East Slope
A Day in Udaipur

Arthur Rimbaud:
The Savior Bumped Upon His Heavy Butt
Squatting

Theodore Roethke:
Loves Progress
All the Earth, All the Air
It was the beginning winter
Highway: Michigan
The Tranced
The Dying Man

Winfield Townkey Scott:
Five for the Grace of Man

Kim Stafford:
Tove Jansson's Island

 

Wiliam Stafford:
A Bridge Begins in the Trees
An Introduction to Some Poems
At Our House
At the Un-National Monument
A Family Turn

Father's Voice
Fifteen
For a Lost Child
Freedom
From the Move to California
How These Words Happened
Ice Fishing
Lake Chelan
Midwest
A Memoria: Son Bret
Mother's Day
My Life
Our Kind
Run Before Dawn

Serving with Gideon
A Star in the Hills
Sky
Story Time
Things That Happen
Together Again
Ultimate Problems
Vocation
Your Life

A Walk in the Country
Watching the Jet Planes Dive
The Way I Write
Witness

 

Trumbull Stickney, At Sainte-Marguerite

Derek Walcott, Forest of Europe

Theodore Weiss, A Dab of Color

Mark Van Doren, Family Pride

 

Paul Verlaine:
Bournemouth
Nightmare
Sequidilla
Snow in the Midst
A Widower Speaks


I have also searched in many book editions that I own
or from the Clark County Library, and I have found
No Quintains or a few rare Quintains
in the collected poetic works of:
John Ashbury, W. H. Auden, Ted Berrigan, Wendell Berry,
Elizabeth Bishop, e. e. cummings, Robert Creely, Billy Collins,
Emily Dickinson, William Everson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg,
Richard Hugo, Michael McClure, W.S. Merwin, Adrienne Rich,
Arthur Rimbaud, Gertrude Stein, Derek Walcott, William Butler Yeats,
Walt Whitman, etc.

Most of the writers listed above were writing in the 20th
Century. Most wrote free verse. Most wrote long poems,
and a few in a short verse style like Emily Dickinson. Many
wrote prose poems. Most favored using quatrains,
couplets, sextexts, octets, one-liners, and mixed length free
verse style poems.

The Quintain is favored by mnay writers of Epigrams and
Moralisms. Many 20th century poets dislike being
too preachy, although social-political-cultural wars
have taken caualities in the poet ranks. Yet, still,
every good writer is hoping to write the perfect
Epigram that will become popular.

And, of course, for a smile... Limericks.

William Stafford uses the quintain form quite
frequently. Louise Gluck frequently uses one
quintain in longer poems. D. H. Lawrence offers
one quintain stanza in many of his poerms.


 

 

 

 

Michael Peter Garofalo (1946-) grew up in East Los Angeles, raised well by June and Big Mike,was educated in Catholic Schools, lived with two other brothers, graduated (B.A., M.S.) from local universities, married Blanche Karen Eubanks, served in the US Air Force, worked in and managed many City and Los Angeles County Public Libraries, raised two children, socialized, traveled, and learned. Retired as the Regional Administrator, East Region, Los Angeles County Public Library in 1998. We moved to a rural 5 acre property in Red Bluff, in the North Sacramento Valley, CA. Webmaster since 1999. Worked part-time for the Corning Union Elementary School District (Technology and Media Services Manager and District Librarian); and as a yoga, Taijiquan, and fitness club instructor until 2016. Traveled extensively in Northern California, Oregon, and Washington. We both retired, and we moved to Vancouver, WA, in 2017. Currently in 2025: reading, writing, gardening, harmonica playing, home chores, yurt camping, exercise, traveling in the Northwest, web publishing, family events, poetry research, photography, Northwest research, Nature mysticism, Buddhist and Taoist literature, walking, sports events, etc.

 

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